Post by Cole Daniels on Feb 20, 2009 21:32:42 GMT -5
Here is my better one which I have only updated thrice with it:
Sonic X
The End of War
Announcer: Last time we left Sonic we were just about to begin an epic battle. We learned of Shadows new betrayal and we are now at the beginning of a terrible and powerful crime. The story began as a quiet day looking at Eggmans base. Then they discover Eggman is in Chris’s world and we are about to witness the fight of the day. Today is the start of the end of war.
His World Plays
Sonic collided with Shadow and they started a fight furious. Shadow smiled as Sonic missed each and every punch. Shadow was blowing Sonic away knocking him all over. As Sonic fell he looked at Shadow and said, “Why are you helping Eggman?” Shadow laughed and said, “You really think I am helping Eggman? That fool is helping me.” Sonic looked at him and said, “You liar.” He ran at Shadow who knocked him back with a chaos Blast.
Sonic fell back and Colin came forward. Shadow smiled and said, “Another pathetic weakling.” Colin ran at him and then Shadow smacked him away. Shadow laughed and said, “You guys are pathetic now you all need to die.” He jumped up into the air and started to activate a Chaos Blast. Knuckles ran out and grabbed Sonic and Slayer grabbed Colin & they ran off before Shadow destroyed part of the street. They then ran to the base.
~Rebel Base~
They arrived at the base and Chris said, “See that is why we cannot fight him right now. We need to get the sacred Emeralds from Shadow.” Tail’s shook his head and said, “What do you mean what are the sacred emeralds?” Chris smiled and said, “Well I am sorry but I am talking about the Chaos Emeralds. I just have to say that because they will not allowed to call them by there real names.” Tail’s nodded and said, “So what should we do with Sonic?” Chris looked at him and said, “I will have some medics come and get him. Anyways guys I think it is time for us to tell you all that has happened and how this all started.”
~About 2 Years Ago~
Chris was at work watching the TV. He looked cause they were about to announce who was the new President. He had noticed a weird entry but he had voted for someone else. This guy had promised a lot of things. He looked as they said all the votes were in and the News announcer said, “And the winner is….. Robotnik.” Chris smiled and said, “What a really weird name.” He looked at the screen and jumped in surprised saying, “Eggman how can that have happened?”
Chris stood in disbelief when Eggman came up and said, “I know that you guys hated me in the past but I promise that change is coming. I will always tell you that I am nice and I am also I am also honest now. Chris laughed and said, “Yeah what total crap.” Chris shook his head and then shut the computer off.
~Present~
“Then he started many wars. He got many allies and then after a long time us rebels came together and tried to stop him. But then Shadow came out of nowhere and attacked us. We lost a couple of people. We stayed hidden but then I learned of Grandpa’s Death and I had to go. So I went out and then of course you know Shadow attacked us there. Well I went back into hiding and then I guess Gun found us and we had to move. So that just happened about a week ago so yeah I guess you know that well that is it. Now it is time for us to know what we can do Tail’s?
Tails sighed and said, “I really do not know I mean I could send something back with the Hologram you are going to send to Sonic to bring the X-Hurricane but I do not think that will work.” All of a sudden they went outside and saw the Hurricane there and Tails said, “But this isn’t possible how could this happen?” Chris smiled and said, “I guess I let it slip about it so I think they sent it here.” Tails laughed and said, “Then let’s go.”
TBC…
Sonic smiled as he jumped onto the back and others piled into the seats. Tails' jumped up front and said, "Watch out guys this will be a bumpy ride." They flew off into the sky and looked around.
They looked and all of a sudden Shadow appeared in front of them and said, "You guys seem to be lost maybe you should land and die." Tails' shook his head and said, "No I will not lose take this Hurricane RoSckets." He pressed a button and rockets blasted out at Shadow who punched them out of the way and said, "You will need to do better than that."
Tails' looked at him and said, "Yeah well take some Hurricane Laser." He pressed another button and shot a laser out. Shadow smiled and said, "Well good job you are going to get me this time but..." He didn't finish it up as he was blasted. Tails' smiled and said, "Yeah we nailed him." Afterwards when the blast was over they looked and saw Shadow was gone. Tails' sighed and said, "Dang it oh well time to go on come on we need a talk with Eggman." They flew off to D.C. to get with Eggman.
TBC...
As they arrived at the White House they saw many weapons. Chris smiled and said, “So it looks like they are ready for us huh?” Tail’s smiled and said, “All the better.” He smiled as he shot at the defenses. As they blew up Sonic jumped out of the way and into a window. Tail’s landed and they entered from the front door.
Sonic smiled and said, “Hey is anyone here or what?” He looked as Tail’s and the others as they came in. Sonic smiled and said, “Okay guys lets get going.” They headed down the hallway towards the oval office. As they were about to get there at a 4 way Corridor they were stopped. They looked to see who it was and out of the shadows came Team Chaotic along with another girl Fox. As she looked up she saw Tail’s and smiled. Vector looked at them and said, “So it looks like you guys came back. To bad this is the end for you. I bet you guys are wondering what we are doing here well lets say that Shadow has paid us a big fee to get rid of you guys. So now attack.”
As he said that Sonic smiled and said, “Now guys lets split into 3 groups. I will stay alone here the others go the other three ways and split them up and meet me at the office.” They nodded and running past the others they ran in all the ways. Vector looked at them and said, “Come on guys lets go Espio you stay behind and fight Sonic. Athan go to the right after Tail’s group Charmy go after Colin’s group & I will go after Chris Myself.” They nodded and left in there directions.
Espio smiled and said, “Well Sonic it is just me and you.” Sonic smiled and said, “Yep so let’s get going.” Sonic ran at Espio who took out a Shuriken and threw it.
To be continued…
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Sonic X
The End of War
Announcer: Last time we left Sonic we were just about to begin an epic battle. We learned of Shadows new betrayal and we are now at the beginning of a terrible and powerful crime. The story began as a quiet day looking at Eggmans base. Then they discover Eggman is in Chris’s world and we are about to witness the fight of the day. Today is the start of the end of war.
His World Plays
Sonic collided with Shadow and they started a fight furious. Shadow smiled as Sonic missed each and every punch. Shadow was blowing Sonic away knocking him all over. As Sonic fell he looked at Shadow and said, “Why are you helping Eggman?” Shadow laughed and said, “You really think I am helping Eggman? That fool is helping me.” Sonic looked at him and said, “You liar.” He ran at Shadow who knocked him back with a chaos Blast.
Sonic fell back and Colin came forward. Shadow smiled and said, “Another pathetic weakling.” Colin ran at him and then Shadow smacked him away. Shadow laughed and said, “You guys are pathetic now you all need to die.” He jumped up into the air and started to activate a Chaos Blast. Knuckles ran out and grabbed Sonic and Slayer grabbed Colin & they ran off before Shadow destroyed part of the street. They then ran to the base.
~Rebel Base~
They arrived at the base and Chris said, “See that is why we cannot fight him right now. We need to get the sacred Emeralds from Shadow.” Tail’s shook his head and said, “What do you mean what are the sacred emeralds?” Chris smiled and said, “Well I am sorry but I am talking about the Chaos Emeralds. I just have to say that because they will not allowed to call them by there real names.” Tail’s nodded and said, “So what should we do with Sonic?” Chris looked at him and said, “I will have some medics come and get him. Anyways guys I think it is time for us to tell you all that has happened and how this all started.”
~About 2 Years Ago~
Chris was at work watching the TV. He looked cause they were about to announce who was the new President. He had noticed a weird entry but he had voted for someone else. This guy had promised a lot of things. He looked as they said all the votes were in and the News announcer said, “And the winner is….. Robotnik.” Chris smiled and said, “What a really weird name.” He looked at the screen and jumped in surprised saying, “Eggman how can that have happened?”
Chris stood in disbelief when Eggman came up and said, “I know that you guys hated me in the past but I promise that change is coming. I will always tell you that I am nice and I am also I am also honest now. Chris laughed and said, “Yeah what total crap.” Chris shook his head and then shut the computer off.
~Present~
“Then he started many wars. He got many allies and then after a long time us rebels came together and tried to stop him. But then Shadow came out of nowhere and attacked us. We lost a couple of people. We stayed hidden but then I learned of Grandpa’s Death and I had to go. So I went out and then of course you know Shadow attacked us there. Well I went back into hiding and then I guess Gun found us and we had to move. So that just happened about a week ago so yeah I guess you know that well that is it. Now it is time for us to know what we can do Tail’s?
Tails sighed and said, “I really do not know I mean I could send something back with the Hologram you are going to send to Sonic to bring the X-Hurricane but I do not think that will work.” All of a sudden they went outside and saw the Hurricane there and Tails said, “But this isn’t possible how could this happen?” Chris smiled and said, “I guess I let it slip about it so I think they sent it here.” Tails laughed and said, “Then let’s go.”
TBC…
Sonic smiled as he jumped onto the back and others piled into the seats. Tails' jumped up front and said, "Watch out guys this will be a bumpy ride." They flew off into the sky and looked around.
They looked and all of a sudden Shadow appeared in front of them and said, "You guys seem to be lost maybe you should land and die." Tails' shook his head and said, "No I will not lose take this Hurricane RoSckets." He pressed a button and rockets blasted out at Shadow who punched them out of the way and said, "You will need to do better than that."
Tails' looked at him and said, "Yeah well take some Hurricane Laser." He pressed another button and shot a laser out. Shadow smiled and said, "Well good job you are going to get me this time but..." He didn't finish it up as he was blasted. Tails' smiled and said, "Yeah we nailed him." Afterwards when the blast was over they looked and saw Shadow was gone. Tails' sighed and said, "Dang it oh well time to go on come on we need a talk with Eggman." They flew off to D.C. to get with Eggman.
TBC...
As they arrived at the White House they saw many weapons. Chris smiled and said, “So it looks like they are ready for us huh?” Tail’s smiled and said, “All the better.” He smiled as he shot at the defenses. As they blew up Sonic jumped out of the way and into a window. Tail’s landed and they entered from the front door.
Sonic smiled and said, “Hey is anyone here or what?” He looked as Tail’s and the others as they came in. Sonic smiled and said, “Okay guys lets get going.” They headed down the hallway towards the oval office. As they were about to get there at a 4 way Corridor they were stopped. They looked to see who it was and out of the shadows came Team Chaotic along with another girl Fox. As she looked up she saw Tail’s and smiled. Vector looked at them and said, “So it looks like you guys came back. To bad this is the end for you. I bet you guys are wondering what we are doing here well lets say that Shadow has paid us a big fee to get rid of you guys. So now attack.”
As he said that Sonic smiled and said, “Now guys lets split into 3 groups. I will stay alone here the others go the other three ways and split them up and meet me at the office.” They nodded and running past the others they ran in all the ways. Vector looked at them and said, “Come on guys lets go Espio you stay behind and fight Sonic. Athan go to the right after Tail’s group Charmy go after Colin’s group & I will go after Chris Myself.” They nodded and left in there directions.
Espio smiled and said, “Well Sonic it is just me and you.” Sonic smiled and said, “Yep so let’s get going.” Sonic ran at Espio who took out a Shuriken and threw it.
To be continued…
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